Долгая дорога к любви.

І'мя автора: HERMIONE GRAINGER
І'мя бети: отсутствует
Пейринг: Гермиона Грейндже/Северус Снейп
Жанр: Романтика
Короткий зміст: 6 курс.

Это мой первый фик. Поэтому не ругайте сильно

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Глава 3.	Mar 25 2006, 13:20	--	1504
Глава 4.	Mar 25 2006, 13:21	--	1502
Глава 5.	Mar 25 2006, 13:22	--	1516
Глава 6.	Mar 25 2006, 13:24	--	1441
Глава 7.	Apr 1 2006, 12:42	--	1547
Глава 8.	May 17 2006, 11:34	--	1716

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Молодец. Фик становится всё лучше и лучше. Ты прислушалась к советам и всё очень хорошо. Ошибок мало. Сюжет хороший. Умница

Блин, сколько интриг, класс. Снейп кажися показывает свой характер!!! А по началу был сам на себя не похож. %)
Все озадачены и ждут прода как и я!
Только вот лучше "Грифиндорка" не использовать, как-то грубо.
Гермиона, Герми, она, её, у неё... ;)

Молодец!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)

Спасибо всем за отклики. Я рада что вам нравится.

Сказать,супер,класс,молодец,умница-это ничего не сказать!
Пиши также хорошо,или лучше!!!!!!!!!!!!! :olivanders: :search:

Мне понравилась эта история. Довольно интересный и неплохой рассказ, хоть он ещё и не закончен. Можно конечно его ещё доработать. Там есть некоторые моменты. Ну в общем можно сделать ещё чуть чуть романтичней ведь это роман. ;)

It has taken place on 6 rate. Гермиона it did not expect.
To it(her) was 17 years. And Гермиона already thought of the future. She(it) was in reflections, that to it(her) to do(make) when study in Хогвартсе will be finished.
Гермиона differed from all pupils Hogvortsa the responsibility. And consequently many teachers could entrust to it(her) the important tasks.
Гермиона very well understood potions. Therefore she(it) was surprised at all with the request of professor Snejpa to help it(him) with preparation of a potion for children, заболевших a flu.
In evening Гермиона has gone down in vaults and has passed on a corridor. She(it) has stopped near a study and has knocked.
- Enter, - the silent quiet voice has sounded.
Гермиона has gone to a dark, cool premise(room).
- Professor Snejp, you asked to help you...-Beginnings Гермиона.
Will suffice to fray(prattle), Ms. Grejndzher! - has torn off her(it) Снейп, - I know, about what I asked you.
It(he) has turned to it(her). High, темноволосый with dark eyes which it is close(attentive) on it(her) looked, in a black cloak, it(he) was similar on embittered, to all white light.
Гермиона has typed(collected) air in a breast and has safely approached to a table.
Снейп has turned to a case and began to get all necessary components for a potion.
-, Ms. Grejndzher, cut a root асфоделя.
Гермиона, was silently accepted to business. And the professor began to mix tinctures and to add necessary powders. Uniqueness of this potion was that for his(its) preparation it was necessary to weld(cook) 2 different potions, and then to mix them.
Гермиона was engaged in preparation of more simple potion, and Северус Снейп - it is heavier. It(he) has rolled up sleeves and valiantly cooked a potion.
Germiona edge(territory) of an eye observed of the professor and all more and it was more convinced that it(he) the expert. Sight Гермионы has fallen on hands of the professor: strong, brawny, in some places scars from the former fights. Гермиона has caught itself on ideas, that it(she) likes these hands and it would be desirable for her(it), that such hands embraced her(it). Гермиона, reddening, has looked away and has switched the attention to a potion.
For 2 business hours Гермиона and the professor were threw only by several phrases. And when preparation of a potion was заверПрошла week. Children have recovered and Хогвартс again was filled cheerful and звонким with laughter.
There was a Friday. And at Гермионы there should be a lesson a potion of cooking.
The girl has gone to a study where pupils already sat. Has rung out a bell. And professor Snejp has not appeared at a lesson.
When employment(occupation) was finished Гермиона together with Harry and Роном has left a study discussing the reasons not arrival Снейпа on a lesson.
One more week has passed. And Снейп again has not appeared. Moreover, nobody saw it(him) in Хогвартсе.
Having decided to find out the reason of absence of the professor, the girl has gone to a study трансфигурации, to professor MakGonagall.
- The professor, where professor Snejp? It(him) is not present two weeks, and at us now very important theme.
- Ms. Grejndzher, we store(keep) it as fiduciary from pupils. But you know much, therefore you can trust. Professor Snejp has gone on the task from the Award of the Phoenix. And as you can see, it(him) still is not present. We experience, that with it(him) something happened.
- So send somebody on searches.
- We do not know exact location Северуса.
Гермиона has left a study not in itself. And what if it(him) have killed? Or it is worse than that. It(he) has returned on the party(side) the Flounce - де-Морта.
The girl of nothing has told to friends. Conditions recently and so heated. All deeply experience returning Dark Lord.
In the evening when all have gone to bed, Гермиона as head Griffindora did(made) detour. Now nobody was, around darkness and silence, steps of the girl were given by an echo. Хогвартс was now similar to the deserted lock with any secrets. Гриффиндорка shuddered at each rustle.
She(it) went slowly. All was quiet. But suddenly...
Гермиона has sharply turned back. To it(her) were heard крадущиеся steps behind one of doors. She(it) has pulled out a magic wand from a pocket of a cloak and has listened. But it was silent.
Гермиона has thought, that to it(her) has seemed. She(it) has lowered(omitted) a stick and already was going to continue the way as the door has unexpectedly swung open. On a threshold there was professor Snejp. His(its) cloak in some places was broken off and deep wounds were visible. From them blood exuded. Trousers in a lap were протёрты up to holes. The leather(skin) on palms and коленях was erased up to blood as though it(he) crept on карачках can go. Deccan Слизерина hardly kept on legs. Eyes Гермионы have extended from a fright and surprise.
The professor has tried to make a step, has swayed and has not fallen nearly if Гермиона has not run up to it(him).
- Professor Snejp, that with you? - the girl has cried.
Снейп has lifted the person. It was very pale. His(its) eyes tried to be focused on person Germiony.
- Грейнджер, what you here do(make)? - weak voice has asked Снейп.
Unexpectedly from his(its) mouth has flowed out струйка blood, and it(he) has begun to cough.
- It is necessary to you in a hospital wing! Lean against me, - the girl has cried.
She(it) has put a hand of the professor to herself on a shoulder. Fragile Гермиона it was bent under weight of body Снейпа. But now nobody could help it(her).
Appearing in a hospital wing, Гермиона has laid the professor on a bed and has cried:
- Madam Pomfri! Faster, here!
Медсестра has run out pulling on the move a dressing gown. And Гермиона has run to professor MakGonagall.
Soon in a hospital wing all teachers Hogvartsa and a little авроров have gathered almost led by Аластором Грюмом.
Гермиона told as she(it) has met professor Snejpa. Her(it) interrupted, asked and have then released(let off) to sleep. But Гермиона and has not fallen asleep that night. She(it) was tormented with different ideas... Then, Гермиона having said goodbye has left a study.

молодец! мне понравилось!

Перемещено в новую форму :)

(Френд без Травки)

Це повідомлення відредагував Френд без Травки - Mar 25 2006, 13:24

надеюсь они в конце поженятся и будут жить счастливо до самой смерти? :lol: помоему стало уж как то слишком наиграно. слшком все быстро происходит.